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Whiskey Days
Some days I feel like a robot
mechanically going through the day
hup two, three, four
eat, sleep, fuck and repeat
The mundane like a piece of plastic wrap
suffocating my mind and soul
making me insane
I want to break through
howl at the moon
run naked through the streets
Not care anymore about my culture and class
whether I make the cut financially
or if i'm good looking enough
I've entered the land of intrigue
just to be bitten in the ass
affairs fleeting with men with no class
Then there are the whiskey days
so mellow and beautiful
when every thing is full of majic
My soul feels at ease
the only thing lacking
is good conversation
becasuse good whisky
always puts me in the mood for philosophical discussions
I wish I was in England where I could just walk to my local pub
where I knew the people and every now and then
a new person of interest would wander in
Sigh instead I live in the country
where you have to drive to your nearest bar
then your headed for a DUI and losing your privelege to drive
So here I tap at my computer
having whisky thoughts and philosophical
discussions with myself
feeling so good I wish every day was a whisky day.
mechanically going through the day
hup two, three, four
eat, sleep, fuck and repeat
The mundane like a piece of plastic wrap
suffocating my mind and soul
making me insane
I want to break through
howl at the moon
run naked through the streets
Not care anymore about my culture and class
whether I make the cut financially
or if i'm good looking enough
I've entered the land of intrigue
just to be bitten in the ass
affairs fleeting with men with no class
Then there are the whiskey days
so mellow and beautiful
when every thing is full of majic
My soul feels at ease
the only thing lacking
is good conversation
becasuse good whisky
always puts me in the mood for philosophical discussions
I wish I was in England where I could just walk to my local pub
where I knew the people and every now and then
a new person of interest would wander in
Sigh instead I live in the country
where you have to drive to your nearest bar
then your headed for a DUI and losing your privelege to drive
So here I tap at my computer
having whisky thoughts and philosophical
discussions with myself
feeling so good I wish every day was a whisky day.
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 18th Jan 2012
| Edited 15th Jun 2012
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enjoyed!
Anonymous
18th Jan 2012 11:41pm
imagery was great Crim!
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re: enjoyed!
18th Jan 2012 11:45pm
ty Mememe I always enjoy it when you stop in being such a tender, sensual and fierce writer..peace to you Crim :)
Testimony good
19th Jan 2012 00:05am
* _-
Yes .. We train like we are now ..
Times
System
Agenda of the day fixed
Yes
We turn the clock
Deadline sleep here
Or appointment to go there
Became a family, such as travelers
How are you doing
High
Bay
Yes
Age of speed
Yes, the era of globalization
Yes
Hello your life with me mechanics
Or
You are also Say
robot life
All this made us drunk
Drunken without wine
Head spin
And hover
And tend
And fall at the end of day
To do
Yesterday
Or work the day before yesterday
Or the same thing last year
Thank you
Testimony good
Thank you to engineer life in the robot world
In the new millennium
*------------------------
*----------------------
Yes ..
To you.
We are human beings.
This is due to a combination of self psychology of human beings .. always ask for things far from reach us .. And when obtained, even if the gift. Self-reluctance thing
Became no value
We want the other
And the other
And the other
So on
Or as you say
Somehow we all get over it, after a period of time.
Thank you
Nice night for you
Yes .. We train like we are now ..
Times
System
Agenda of the day fixed
Yes
We turn the clock
Deadline sleep here
Or appointment to go there
Became a family, such as travelers
How are you doing
High
Bay
Yes
Age of speed
Yes, the era of globalization
Yes
Hello your life with me mechanics
Or
You are also Say
robot life
All this made us drunk
Drunken without wine
Head spin
And hover
And tend
And fall at the end of day
To do
Yesterday
Or work the day before yesterday
Or the same thing last year
Thank you
Testimony good
Thank you to engineer life in the robot world
In the new millennium
*------------------------
*----------------------
Yes ..
To you.
We are human beings.
This is due to a combination of self psychology of human beings .. always ask for things far from reach us .. And when obtained, even if the gift. Self-reluctance thing
Became no value
We want the other
And the other
And the other
So on
Or as you say
Somehow we all get over it, after a period of time.
Thank you
Nice night for you
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re: Testimony good
19th Jan 2012 6:53pm
oh Crim
Anonymous
19th Jan 2012 7:29am
You hit me hard in that opening stanza,
That robotic routine kills me.
The write overall was an enjoyable read and a testament to wonderful writing and clean style.
And then you closed it with self time I cherish so very much.
Well done
Al -x-
That robotic routine kills me.
The write overall was an enjoyable read and a testament to wonderful writing and clean style.
And then you closed it with self time I cherish so very much.
Well done
Al -x-
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re: oh Crim
19th Jan 2012 6:55pm
howl at the moon
19th Jan 2012 10:34am
"I want to break through howl at the moon
run naked through the streets"
I love this part most of all, I have some nights like this. wonderful piece loved it.
Gypsy red
run naked through the streets"
I love this part most of all, I have some nights like this. wonderful piece loved it.
Gypsy red
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re: howl at the moon
19th Jan 2012 6:57pm
eat, sleep, fuck and repeat
19th Jan 2012 5:16pm
re: eat, sleep, fuck and repeat
19th Jan 2012 6:57pm
re: whiskey
19th Jan 2012 6:58pm
really enjoyed reading this
Anonymous
19th Jan 2012 8:07pm
....house swap? You come to England and drink Whisky at the pub and I can get the hell out of here?!
;-)
I love the closing stanza -
"So here I tap at my computer.."
Beautifully written
;-)
I love the closing stanza -
"So here I tap at my computer.."
Beautifully written
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re: really enjoyed reading this
22nd Jan 2012 10:16am
I wish lol I would love to come to England..ty for the read and sweet comment..peace Crim :)
Great Voice
20th Jan 2012 1:52am
your voice really spoke through the words,love the choice of simplistic, really made the poem memorable
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:)
20th Jan 2012 3:13am
Crim
The fifth stanza was
potent. It stood out.
Loved the tone and the
nakedness of this.
Great read,
S'
p.s-'Majic' was stark.:)
privelage should be
'privilege'
The fifth stanza was
potent. It stood out.
Loved the tone and the
nakedness of this.
Great read,
S'
p.s-'Majic' was stark.:)
privelage should be
'privilege'
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re: :)
22nd Jan 2012 10:18am
ty I enjoy your writing very much..ty for such a beautiful compliment..peace Crim :)
!!!
22nd Jan 2012 1:44am
re: !!!
22nd Jan 2012 10:19am