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daffodil

  
the day lonely in her heart wept daffodils
and I wore the day's sorrow
my blue demeanor said it all
you look at me and knew
I was troubled
 
you called me from my dark place
with kaleidoscope visions of love
but I couldn't meet you there
my bittersweet held me too tightly
 
so you sat quietly next to me
and whispered your loneliness into my hollows
deeply moved, I felt inside your ache
and we were one within the day
 
 
 
Written by crimsin (Unveiling)
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