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Free spirit
Wind bristling through my hair
My eyes closed, my lungs savouring the fresh air
Feet in the salty water,
I can almost feel the ocean whispering,'Come my daughter '
Here I am alone, beneath the dark sky
On the sandy beach contentedly I lie
Staring at the stars so beautiful and so high
No reason to weep, no reason to cry
I can almost feel my majestic wings
Ready to pop out to let me join the kings
The rulers of the night with their enchanting hoot
If only I could discover the treasure Night brings
Still I hear the ocean calling out to me
Promising to help me and to set me free
The dark waters are tempting,so clear and so cool
Bigger than the sea,bluer than a pool
I can almost feel my feet merging together
The scales popping out, my body sinking further
Into the deceitful ocean as my mermaid tail swings
Splashing from side to side, replacing my wings
Out here anything is possible
Out here my voice is audible
Out here I am free,
To be all I wish to be
My eyes closed, my lungs savouring the fresh air
Feet in the salty water,
I can almost feel the ocean whispering,'Come my daughter '
Here I am alone, beneath the dark sky
On the sandy beach contentedly I lie
Staring at the stars so beautiful and so high
No reason to weep, no reason to cry
I can almost feel my majestic wings
Ready to pop out to let me join the kings
The rulers of the night with their enchanting hoot
If only I could discover the treasure Night brings
Still I hear the ocean calling out to me
Promising to help me and to set me free
The dark waters are tempting,so clear and so cool
Bigger than the sea,bluer than a pool
I can almost feel my feet merging together
The scales popping out, my body sinking further
Into the deceitful ocean as my mermaid tail swings
Splashing from side to side, replacing my wings
Out here anything is possible
Out here my voice is audible
Out here I am free,
To be all I wish to be
Published 11th Jun 2020
Author's Note
I've only been to the ocean once physically. I go there a lot in my head when I need to escape.
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11th Jun 2020 11:40pm
This is really good! This is always how I feel when we visit the ocean every year - so free and powerful, like anything could happen. Great job!
11th Jun 2020 11:42pm
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11th Jun 2020 11:56pm
Excellent first poem, Seeher! You put a lot of emotion and beautiful imagery & energy into this one... Bravo, and welcome to DUP! Keep up the writing :)
12th Jun 2020 1:50am
Great job you sounded like you could transform into any animal you wanted . But to my mj ds eye a mermaid sprang into my head. Great job welcome to DUP.look forward to reading your other works
12th Jun 2020 2:43am
12th Jun 2020 5:08am
12th Jun 2020 7:38pm
I can see you there.. the entire metamorphosis and the imposed tranquility..
good style, flow and structure (syllable count)
Impressive
Smoke
respect
good style, flow and structure (syllable count)
Impressive
Smoke
respect
12th Jun 2020 7:46pm
12th Jun 2020 9:01pm
Well done , for a first submission See Her...
Now , whether you consciously *know* the Code , or not...
That is yet to be determined...;)
Yet , I teach an extremely ancient Code...
How our brain is *wired* , and the reality around us is programmed...
The *real* Matrix...
We have a number of arrangements of symbols , that have
77 levels each , one being number values for each symbol...
One of the arrangements of symbols , is two columns of eight ;
One of those columns , is known as *Goddess* , one *God* ;
In Obri / Hebrew , the sum of one to eight , being 36 , and the
words in Obri / Hebrew , *Goddess* , *God* , each equal 36...
Those are the two columns of eight , then...
However , the bottom two symbols , in the *Goddess* column ,
fit together , make the shape of an Owl , and the value for the
symbol above , adds to the number for Owl ( 300 ) ;
That symbol , means transformation ;
Yet , the eight symbols in the whole column ( *Goddess* column ) ,
make the skeletal , or muscular system of the body ;
So , the *Goddess* , and the *Owl*...
Yet , there is a straight line symbol , which has a value of 7 ,
which can be added to either column...*Goddess* column equals 603 ;
So we have 610
And , In Obri / Hebrew , the value 610 equals their word for *Sea*
Yet , 604 equals :
Looking At Mermaid + Rock
Further ,, to go to the *God* column ;
390 = Sky
You see , as these are the codes we are wired with
we perceive reality through this inner lens , even
when we are not "aware" ;
Funny enough :
Awareness = 602
( And *that* is the *Goddess* gift to Women )
Men have consciousness as the prime function ,
yet both sexes have a balance of the other , to
a lesser degree...
Welcome to DUP...
Keep writing , I shall be watching you...
( I saw I am on your reading list )
Be Well !
( you are tapped in , consciously , or subconsciously )
Now , whether you consciously *know* the Code , or not...
That is yet to be determined...;)
Yet , I teach an extremely ancient Code...
How our brain is *wired* , and the reality around us is programmed...
The *real* Matrix...
We have a number of arrangements of symbols , that have
77 levels each , one being number values for each symbol...
One of the arrangements of symbols , is two columns of eight ;
One of those columns , is known as *Goddess* , one *God* ;
In Obri / Hebrew , the sum of one to eight , being 36 , and the
words in Obri / Hebrew , *Goddess* , *God* , each equal 36...
Those are the two columns of eight , then...
However , the bottom two symbols , in the *Goddess* column ,
fit together , make the shape of an Owl , and the value for the
symbol above , adds to the number for Owl ( 300 ) ;
That symbol , means transformation ;
Yet , the eight symbols in the whole column ( *Goddess* column ) ,
make the skeletal , or muscular system of the body ;
So , the *Goddess* , and the *Owl*...
Yet , there is a straight line symbol , which has a value of 7 ,
which can be added to either column...*Goddess* column equals 603 ;
So we have 610
And , In Obri / Hebrew , the value 610 equals their word for *Sea*
Yet , 604 equals :
Looking At Mermaid + Rock
Further ,, to go to the *God* column ;
390 = Sky
You see , as these are the codes we are wired with
we perceive reality through this inner lens , even
when we are not "aware" ;
Funny enough :
Awareness = 602
( And *that* is the *Goddess* gift to Women )
Men have consciousness as the prime function ,
yet both sexes have a balance of the other , to
a lesser degree...
Welcome to DUP...
Keep writing , I shall be watching you...
( I saw I am on your reading list )
Be Well !
( you are tapped in , consciously , or subconsciously )
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