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Outside the window
Quiet thoughts turn to screams
Trapped in an ever shrinking room
The air unbreathable and thick
Nothing has ever changed this much
Stuck on this side of the window
Trapped in an ever shrinking room
The air unbreathable and thick
Nothing has ever changed this much
Stuck on this side of the window
Published 8th Jun 2020
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How are you? Have you not been out in a while? Is it because you don't feel like it or are maybe a bit apprehensive like a lot of us are regarding the social distancing thing?
This poem says/conveys a lot in the few short lines.
This poem says/conveys a lot in the few short lines.
11th Jun 2020 1:18am
You can convey the idea of anxiety so well it's almost suffocating to read the words.
I hope you are OK and that you continue to write.
I hope you are OK and that you continue to write.
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
19th Jun 2020 9:50am
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