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mockingbirds in my soul
sang halleluja not really meaning it
as the pastor drone on early Sunday morning
in the stuffy room I couldn't find God
praise felt false on my tongue
and I wasn't going to fake it
I was at home in nature
that's where I met our creator
people will let you down
they will lie to you
nature is true to self
the birds get up every morning and sing
you can count on them
in nature I find real love
there my soul can soar
in my heart there is true praise
for the glory of his handiwork
sang halleluja not really meaning it
as the pastor drone on early Sunday morning
in the stuffy room I couldn't find God
praise felt false on my tongue
and I wasn't going to fake it
I was at home in nature
that's where I met our creator
people will let you down
they will lie to you
nature is true to self
the birds get up every morning and sing
you can count on them
in nature I find real love
there my soul can soar
in my heart there is true praise
for the glory of his handiwork
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Re. church
5th Jun 2020 6:30pm
Stunning. And honestly, in my opinion, where God prefers we find him and commune with him... this is powerful
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Re: Re. church
5th Jun 2020 6:46pm
thank you beautiful Julia yes nature is true to him I can always find him among the flowers and trees... I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
Re: Re. church
6th Jun 2020 1:57pm
Re: Re. church
12th Jun 2020 7:02pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly me too nature brings me to higher realm I deeply cherish your thoughts 🌹💕
Re. church
5th Jun 2020 6:40pm
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5th Jun 2020 6:46pm
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5th Jun 2020 6:44pm
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5th Jun 2020 6:48pm
thank you graciously dearest Tallen yes as each of us sees the creator 🌹 I deeply appreciate your thoughts my dear friend 💕
Re: Re. church
5th Jun 2020 6:50pm
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5th Jun 2020 10:56pm
Re. church
5th Jun 2020 7:32pm
Truth is shining here
Religion is a money maker
Spiritual is free
You just have to know how to give and take
Awesome remarkable beautiful writing
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Religion is a money maker
Spiritual is free
You just have to know how to give and take
Awesome remarkable beautiful writing
X
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Re: Re. church
5th Jun 2020 8:03pm
aw thank you dearest Poet that a means a lot to me ❤ I deeply appreciate your thoughts my friend...
Re: Re. church
5th Jun 2020 8:48pm
Re: Re. church
5th Jun 2020 8:52pm
thank you my friend you know something strange happened to me while I was ill and pacing in the nature I had a constant visitor who helped bring me back to reality I wasn't alone...he wasn't as expected it was a liberating experience... I've been witnessing a change in you as well... it's beautiful 💕
Re: Re. church
5th Jun 2020 9:18pm
Thank you
I’m a little more content
Blowing past stuff that was difficult and not very satisfying ...
😻
I’m a little more content
Blowing past stuff that was difficult and not very satisfying ...
😻
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Re. church
5th Jun 2020 10:50pm
This is why I climb trees. I also participate in a community of creator-loving people, trying to bring them along, but that's my choice and I know it isn't everyone's. I hope one day they'll see beyond their "institution".
Beautifully written. ❤
Beautifully written. ❤
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Re: Re. church
5th Jun 2020 10:58pm
thank you beautiful poetess I agree I have a strong affinity for trees and deep connetion to them they gave me a place to get away from the world when I was small... I deeply appreciate you sharing your lovely thoughts 🌹
Re. church
6th Jun 2020 00:11am
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Re. church
6th Jun 2020 4:34am
This is a beautiful escape, I remember going to church, it was sterile compared to the chaos in nature, but gave it all meaning in the idea of it being God's creation. Its a great perspective to appreciate both sides and see the wisdom :)
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Re: Re. church
12th Jun 2020 7:01pm
thank you graciously beautiful PR I love nature it keeps me sane...I deeply appreciate your thoughts here ❤
Re. church
6th Jun 2020 5:38am
Dear B,
God might be in buildings but he/she lives and reigns outdoors. Exquisitely tender write. H🌷
God might be in buildings but he/she lives and reigns outdoors. Exquisitely tender write. H🌷
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Re: Re. church
12th Jun 2020 7:03pm
thank you beautiful Honoria yes nature follows the rules set by our creator I can count on it to be true I deeply cherish you 💕
Re. church
6th Jun 2020 1:57pm
Re: Re. church
12th Jun 2020 7:04pm
thank you beautiful Dragonfly for the love here it's felt forgive my late response I've been so down lately I cherish you 🌹💕
Re. church
6th Jun 2020 7:24pm
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Re. church
17th Jun 2020 7:27pm
This is great. What counts is to find God and believe in Him, but to keep Him with you wherever you go.
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