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The Weakness Of We
I hurt
deep
so do
You
Ill of body
Ill of mind
we slow
we whine
for love
for care
does
it matter
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if
Your lucky
yes
deep
so do
You
Ill of body
Ill of mind
we slow
we whine
for love
for care
does
it matter
*********************************************************************************
if
Your lucky
yes
Published 31st May 2020
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31st May 2020 00:16am
Luck is a prevailing element to how 'we" progress. Its true that emotional displays have some impact, but it can backfire. We can only hope for the best. Strong poeting, my friend.
31st May 2020 00:21am
Only thru my Friends such as You do I have an ounce of strength Crow
Thank You for being here!!!
Thank You for being here!!!
31st May 2020 00:22am
A wonderful poetically wrapped truth. I love these journeys you take us on with your words.
31st May 2020 00:26am
Appreciate Your visit and Kindness LD!!!
we all need those hugs don't we?
we all need those hugs don't we?
31st May 2020 00:56am
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31st May 2020 3:17am
31st May 2020 3:07am
It is, isn't it. The echo, the mirror, the companionship.
Relates tremendously, Soul.
Relates tremendously, Soul.
31st May 2020 3:18am
31st May 2020 5:59am
We all crave for love. It is a human weakness we all suffer from. Well penned Soul. 🙏❤
31st May 2020 10:00am
We Need it Summer and so many do not have it in their life.
Thank You for Your visit and kind Words -Always!!!
Thank You for Your visit and kind Words -Always!!!
31st May 2020 6:35am
the pains n the so weakness..is the hard~ wise tempering the strength that shines a pierre noire a kohinoor..in all mellowing warmth..the luck you say is the love & warmth that forever thrives n embraces in a loving soul..Love is All.. beautiful & haunting dear soul .. light & love :)
31st May 2020 10:01am
Dear Uma Thank You for Your visit!!!
I am glad this one resonates with You-makes sense it would to Your heart!!!
Thank You Always !!!
I am glad this one resonates with You-makes sense it would to Your heart!!!
Thank You Always !!!
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Appreciate You finding me MP!!!
Your kindness and time is Appreciated even more!!!
Your kindness and time is Appreciated even more!!!
