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The Kiss...
My ears hear the sound
but my eyes see only the
motion of her lips.
Her voice is like music
drawing me in like the doomed ships of lore.
We kiss, that great dam of emotion bursts,
a tsunami of passion floods my being.
I am swept out of reality into the moment.
But the moment is fleeting, the passion recedes
yet the music continues
to, once again, draw me to that shore of mystery.
but my eyes see only the
motion of her lips.
Her voice is like music
drawing me in like the doomed ships of lore.
We kiss, that great dam of emotion bursts,
a tsunami of passion floods my being.
I am swept out of reality into the moment.
But the moment is fleeting, the passion recedes
yet the music continues
to, once again, draw me to that shore of mystery.
Written by
anvinvil
(Anvillan)
Published 30th May 2020
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First kiss...
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Re. The Kiss...
Anonymous
30th May 2020 1:21pm
So passionate and beautiful...
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Re. The Kiss...
30th May 2020 2:59pm
"doomed ships of lore" ... the Sirens ... Lorelei ... wonderful write ... it has an epic feel about it ... great flow and cadence to carry me along ...
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30th May 2020 3:35pm
Re. The Kiss...
30th May 2020 7:37pm
Ahh, the siren songs! They can be a bitch. I have to wonder why that passion receded? Was the siren not interested? Is she playing hard to get? At least you still have the music.
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30th May 2020 10:54pm
Gosh, I hadn’t considered a scenario... bet I could up with one not so subtle...😄🙏
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30th May 2020 11:01pm
Re. The Kiss...
31st May 2020 5:00am
Dear A,
I sure wish my first kiss resembled your first kiss. “a tsunami of passion floods my being. ” I envision the scene in From Here To Eternity. This is a very sweet nod to the special memory of that first kiss. Lovely write. H🌷
I sure wish my first kiss resembled your first kiss. “a tsunami of passion floods my being. ” I envision the scene in From Here To Eternity. This is a very sweet nod to the special memory of that first kiss. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re. The Kiss...
31st May 2020 12:55pm
Thanks H! I left out the erotic element that was present. But the feeling is as presented. So happy you liked it. I respect your opinion. A.