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Naked Intensity
You are the essence of my heartbeat, my love
No other can claim my mind, if there ever was
You take me to the moon and beyond the stars
A soft Venus laying upon the hardness of mars
Come soar with me
Let out love resonate beyond the gift of the sea
The beginning of such faint bliss, expressed in each moan I cry to the Heaven for our deliverance, I surrender, lost in the echoes of my pants, giving in to the saturation
The mm.. of its dedication, please me baby, my rainfall, liberating as I sink into the tsunami of your cravings
No other can claim my mind, if there ever was
You take me to the moon and beyond the stars
A soft Venus laying upon the hardness of mars
Come soar with me
Let out love resonate beyond the gift of the sea
The beginning of such faint bliss, expressed in each moan I cry to the Heaven for our deliverance, I surrender, lost in the echoes of my pants, giving in to the saturation
The mm.. of its dedication, please me baby, my rainfall, liberating as I sink into the tsunami of your cravings
Published 30th May 2020
| Edited 8th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Sacrifices are concerned with the feelings of devotion and longing.
Xun Kuang
Xun Kuang
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30th May 2020 5:07am
30th May 2020 8:12am
Hot, could sense the intensity. Favourite lines:
The beginning of such faint bliss, expressed in each moan I cry to the Heaven for our deliverance, I surrender, lost in the echoes of my pants, giving in to the the saturation, the mm of it dedication, please me baby, my rainfall, liberating as I sink into the tsunami of your cravings
The beginning of such faint bliss, expressed in each moan I cry to the Heaven for our deliverance, I surrender, lost in the echoes of my pants, giving in to the the saturation, the mm of it dedication, please me baby, my rainfall, liberating as I sink into the tsunami of your cravings
31st May 2020 00:59am
Oh.. I love it, and thank you for taking the time to read and then adding a comment, have a great evening and a blessed Sunday my poet
30th May 2020 8:03pm
I stand on thy words to lick thy peach i be on such a high as the unvirse would be you so sweet to the touch
like this my sweet dear friend
like this my sweet dear friend
31st May 2020 1:00am
Are we being naughty my poet.. wink, however thank you my friend for taking the time to read and then adding a sweet comment. Do enjoy your evening as well
31st May 2020 3:02am
31st May 2020 3:05am
