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Bring Her Home
Bring her home
please
she's my baby girl
I plead
she belongs with me
this is wrong
don't you see .
Her bike lies outside
my pain it hikes
to an all time high ,
I see her pink hair brush
low can't sink , as it's way to much
bring her home please
my worlds on hold
in the cold , of freeze .
The days , the nights
I strain my pain for life ,
memories swirl
my mind , my baby girl ,
shadows of her face
I try so hard to trace ,
devastation seems
to me , to be so lame ,
I try to call her
I'm ignored
I go insane
I'm her mother , her father
in her life of everyday ,
if this goes much further
I'll die now anyday ,
does this mean nothing to you
as you , do turn away .
Stab me to death
and tear my soul apart
crush my chest
run me over in your car ,
for that is best
than this hole
right through my heart ,
I'm the walking dead
in this land of oh so far .
My energy drains away ,
like a ghost in long gone days
my eyes are now in flames
her voice , my mind does play ,
I stare at all her games
they glare like razor blades
bring my J.J home
to god I do so pray ,
Her brothers and I
are so now zombified ,
we cuddle and cry
and they , just don't know why .
For christs sake
oh why , is it I you hate
for she's only nine
it's not her choice to make .
please
she's my baby girl
I plead
she belongs with me
this is wrong
don't you see .
Her bike lies outside
my pain it hikes
to an all time high ,
I see her pink hair brush
low can't sink , as it's way to much
bring her home please
my worlds on hold
in the cold , of freeze .
The days , the nights
I strain my pain for life ,
memories swirl
my mind , my baby girl ,
shadows of her face
I try so hard to trace ,
devastation seems
to me , to be so lame ,
I try to call her
I'm ignored
I go insane
I'm her mother , her father
in her life of everyday ,
if this goes much further
I'll die now anyday ,
does this mean nothing to you
as you , do turn away .
Stab me to death
and tear my soul apart
crush my chest
run me over in your car ,
for that is best
than this hole
right through my heart ,
I'm the walking dead
in this land of oh so far .
My energy drains away ,
like a ghost in long gone days
my eyes are now in flames
her voice , my mind does play ,
I stare at all her games
they glare like razor blades
bring my J.J home
to god I do so pray ,
Her brothers and I
are so now zombified ,
we cuddle and cry
and they , just don't know why .
For christs sake
oh why , is it I you hate
for she's only nine
it's not her choice to make .
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Oh my gosh!
17th Jan 2012 1:05am
I almost cried. That's so sad. :'(
Just a well said string of emotions, expressing your emptiness without her.
Just a well said string of emotions, expressing your emptiness without her.
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re: Oh my gosh!
17th Jan 2012 1:22am
the 3 live with me and the mother took her and was meant to bring her home on sunday and she is trying to keep her and it's so bad I tell you it hurts like hell
Iove
17th Jan 2012 1:45am
will bring her home. For her home is your heart, always. Always remember that.
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re: Iove
So sorry
Anonymous
17th Jan 2012 2:54am
that some exes are the low life and scum of the earth!!!! I just dont think that it occurs to some adults that they Actually have to grow up themselves when they bring children into this world :(
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re: So sorry
Feel you pain
17th Jan 2012 8:49am
I lost my son 13.5 years ago, his mother took him for the week. She never brought him back. I've been searching ever since. The pain never lessens, only grow deeper. Take her back by force if you must.
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re: Feel you pain
17th Jan 2012 8:57am
oh my god ryan that's awful , shit that's so bad man , thanks for your comment and heed I will take from your words thanks again
aww!
Paul,its so touchy.
I stay in hostel,missing my Baba(Dad).I pray that yourlil'angel returns to you soon.
I stay in hostel,missing my Baba(Dad).I pray that yourlil'angel returns to you soon.
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re: aww!
17th Jan 2012 9:32am
Hit a nerve.
Anonymous
17th Jan 2012 1:29pm
This reminded me so much of what happened to us. My fiance has a daughter who is 10, and he often recalls to me that the last thing he remembers before he left was seeing his little girls face. There was a terrible incident months after they split up in which the mother came and quite violently told the child she was coming home while she was visiting her dad. she was ripped away from him. This reminded me so much of how he must have felt that day. "Her bike lays outside" was very poignant. I could see it in my mind, the front wheel spinning around and around.
Very very emotional piece. You should be proud, and if this is your situation, i hope you sort it out soon x
Very very emotional piece. You should be proud, and if this is your situation, i hope you sort it out soon x
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re: Hit a nerve.
17th Jan 2012 1:40pm
yeah unfortunately it is my situation and I'm doing all I can right now to fix it but thanks for your comment miss sub
just take her back
17th Jan 2012 5:21pm
listen hun your daughter is yours you have custody go to the police and tell them that your ex wife kidnapped your daughter
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Bring her home
17th Jan 2012 5:49pm
As a mother, this terrified me. So... I don't like it. The fear is too real. Never give up. Fight for her. Report it. Scream, fight, recruit poets from this site to help you out. Search, kick down her door, but never, ever give up. Sometimes, faith carries us through. We could start a Facebook page insisting on her return. Don't give her up.
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re: Bring her home
Ouch..
17th Jan 2012 7:09pm
Wow, there is so much emotion expressed in this poem... really saddening and touching - I like it a lot though. My favorite line: "I strain my pain for life"
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re: Ouch..
17th Jan 2012 7:48pm
:(
17th Jan 2012 9:37pm
Your poem helped me to finish one I've been working on for a while, about my son. Even decided to post it here. God does it bring back the pain and hurt.
Alexander Joseph Cappel Revis
For years now I've searched for you
But I still can't find my little boy blue
The tears I've cried and blood I've shed
Yet my heart is filled with such dread
Never will I forget that look on your face
When I held you close in our happy place
Or how your eyes lit up with glee
When we crawled under the Christmas tree
I still think of you laying in bed at night
I will never give up this fight
God this is so unfair
Is what I think when I hold your teddy bear
His fur is stained from the tears I've cried
Each one a part of me that died
Most will never understand
What it's like to miss your son growing into a man
Alexander Joseph Cappel Revis
For years now I've searched for you
But I still can't find my little boy blue
The tears I've cried and blood I've shed
Yet my heart is filled with such dread
Never will I forget that look on your face
When I held you close in our happy place
Or how your eyes lit up with glee
When we crawled under the Christmas tree
I still think of you laying in bed at night
I will never give up this fight
God this is so unfair
Is what I think when I hold your teddy bear
His fur is stained from the tears I've cried
Each one a part of me that died
Most will never understand
What it's like to miss your son growing into a man
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re: :(
17th Jan 2012 10:04pm
nice poem and my thoughts and hopes are with you mate as that is disgusting what happened , I know
re: re: :(
17th Jan 2012 10:34pm
It seems that those that do these kind of things have no conscience, no heart for the child. It's the child that truly pays the price in these situations, not that we don't. But at least we as adults have a better ability to cope in some fashion.
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18th Jan 2012 00:08am
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