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Becoming Nothing / Nothing Becomes Me / A Battle Cry
It's way too late to become
any thing.
Guess I had a chance & blew it,
I
suppose.
Imagine what they think when
one
proclaims that
one
is
No Thing,
(or nothing, as it occurs).
Oh,you verdant Florida
crepuscule, you.
pleas bless this thing
of
no
with silly'ass Paradise
aspirations,
come from
the bloody
swords
of conquistadors,
lookin'for lost Youth, as
follied as it
sounds
(Stupid white men killing for God.)
Missionary position everybody!
Uno !
Dos !
Tres !
Quatro !!!!
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2020dkzkpoom+
Published 28th May 2020
Author's Note
inspired by inspiration
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29th May 2020 00:30am
2nd Jun 2020 3:58pm
2nd Jun 2020 2:00pm
For honest critique. I didn't understand everything. This poem is a foreign world to me. BUT it made me curious what other poems you have written.
Thereafter I can say, you have YOUR style pointing at things (which are not in my world) but I heared things from your world.
All your poems reminded me of graffiti paintings. Trying to tell people a message in places where they wouldn't expect a poem. Trespassing as an obscure warrior lines of social accepted conduct. (Not meant in a negative way)
Thereafter I can say, you have YOUR style pointing at things (which are not in my world) but I heared things from your world.
All your poems reminded me of graffiti paintings. Trying to tell people a message in places where they wouldn't expect a poem. Trespassing as an obscure warrior lines of social accepted conduct. (Not meant in a negative way)
"All your poems reminded me of graffiti paintings. Trying to tell people a message in places where they wouldn't expect a poem."
You got it here. My poems are not supposed to "make sense" in any usual way. I challenge the reader to make their own sense. It's like things seen out of the corner of the your eye that is not as mundane as what yr focusing on.
The post WW1 Dada artists have been a major "influence" as well as the so-called "beat" writers. Their written spontaneously, ala stream-of-consciousness.. Buddhist non-dualism also an influence.
Thank you for your taking the time to write about it. Very few do.
Actually, a fair amount of my writing makes so much sense as to bring one to tears.
cheerio! dkzk
You got it here. My poems are not supposed to "make sense" in any usual way. I challenge the reader to make their own sense. It's like things seen out of the corner of the your eye that is not as mundane as what yr focusing on.
The post WW1 Dada artists have been a major "influence" as well as the so-called "beat" writers. Their written spontaneously, ala stream-of-consciousness.. Buddhist non-dualism also an influence.
Thank you for your taking the time to write about it. Very few do.
Actually, a fair amount of my writing makes so much sense as to bring one to tears.
cheerio! dkzk
