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THE FLIRT
You know the flirt
Is a good one
If you feel guided
By the invisible hand
Of the muse
Designer of love
Enabler of passion
Dispenser of devotion
And devastation
Is a good one
If you feel guided
By the invisible hand
Of the muse
Designer of love
Enabler of passion
Dispenser of devotion
And devastation
Published 26th May 2020
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26th May 2020 5:01am
This is cute. It has good cadence. Impactful word choices. I like it. It’s fun and playful.
26th May 2020 5:11am
26th May 2020 5:32am
I like designer, be cause they next lines follow with action, implying involvement. Whereas a prophet simply sees visions, and wouldn’t necessarily be an active participant. Just my thoughts though. I think your original instincts are on point.
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