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ALL RIVERS FLOW

Ocean is calling
Pulling itself out of me
Thru glazed, awestruck eyes

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 24th May 2020

#emotional #river #sea #senryu

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Re. ALL RIVERS FLOW

Honoria

24th May 2020 9:07pm

Dear S,

For me, this piece read about the awesome gravitational pull the water has and its healing power as well as its power of destruction. I prefer to think of it more healing though. It brought lovely memories and images to mind of oceanic trips of past days. Great write. H 🌷