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your bad ideas
fisherman's wharf bound
undressed thoughts
on the verge of egress
immersed in the aftertaste of your salty
air
shimmers glisten off the mound
and I feel
pretzel'd
your chest cavity
ripped opened
listening
to my sound
echoes beat where midnight lasts
beyond the howl of one beast
I scalp the frost from your windowpane
and tongue out the truth
leaving lasting memories
of the only pleasure
that was meant for me
undressed thoughts
on the verge of egress
immersed in the aftertaste of your salty
air
shimmers glisten off the mound
and I feel
pretzel'd
your chest cavity
ripped opened
listening
to my sound
echoes beat where midnight lasts
beyond the howl of one beast
I scalp the frost from your windowpane
and tongue out the truth
leaving lasting memories
of the only pleasure
that was meant for me
Published 21st May 2020
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22nd May 2020 00:12am
"echoes beat where midnight lasts
beyond the howl of one beast"
dearest Tim killer lines in this passionate write ❤
beyond the howl of one beast"
dearest Tim killer lines in this passionate write ❤
22nd May 2020 11:29am
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25th May 2020 6:57pm
This builds momentum until that final stanza peaks.
Wonderful writing, Tim. Looks like the Muse is keeping her part of the bargain.
Wonderful writing, Tim. Looks like the Muse is keeping her part of the bargain.
