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That's poetry
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The way I bleed
it's fucking poetry
that's what you want to see
everything dirty and broken in me
all those scenes that capture the eye
all that shit that fucks the mind
that's poetry
it's like a sick disease
rape me
break me
drop me to my knees
everything salty and raw
this is what you need
and I shouldn't care
what anyone says
sticks and stones
they're all in my head
when I cut it open
and everything's been bled
that's poetry
that's poetry they said
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The way I bleed
it's fucking poetry
that's what you want to see
everything dirty and broken in me
all those scenes that capture the eye
all that shit that fucks the mind
that's poetry
it's like a sick disease
rape me
break me
drop me to my knees
everything salty and raw
this is what you need
and I shouldn't care
what anyone says
sticks and stones
they're all in my head
when I cut it open
and everything's been bled
that's poetry
that's poetry they said
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Re. That's poetry
18th May 2020 4:52am
dearest Ani I love the raw truth to this
it's real and the underlying anger relatable
at least that's my perception...
great write ❤
it's real and the underlying anger relatable
at least that's my perception...
great write ❤
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Re. That's poetry
18th May 2020 7:22am
Hullon and welcome
I like this, and it's factualness, theres a kind of familiar feel to it, easy to get through, easy to understand.
*hat tjp* <~
I like this, and it's factualness, theres a kind of familiar feel to it, easy to get through, easy to understand.
*hat tjp* <~
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Re: Re. That's poetry
18th May 2020 7:25am
Re. That's poetry
18th May 2020 9:43am
Good spill Ani, part of what drew me to Your Writing is it tends to keep a foot planted in the real and concrete.
This of course is a bit moreso,....like going to the museum (can You feel the crowd as You stay behind the velvet rope?) I come to see the painting.
Greatness Ani ---Pen On!!!
This of course is a bit moreso,....like going to the museum (can You feel the crowd as You stay behind the velvet rope?) I come to see the painting.
Greatness Ani ---Pen On!!!
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Re. That's poetry
Anonymous
18th May 2020 11:34am
Wow! This is so raw and powerful.
Excellent spill!
Excellent spill!
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Re. That's poetry
18th May 2020 11:46am
Re. That's poetry
18th May 2020 9:33pm
Dear A,
Intense emotional write. You laid your cards on the table and no one can argue that truth. Words can wound as deeply as cuts and they all play out towards how we’ll deal with the fallout of that hurt. You have a fabulous cutting edge style I find admirable. Excellent write. H 🌷
Intense emotional write. You laid your cards on the table and no one can argue that truth. Words can wound as deeply as cuts and they all play out towards how we’ll deal with the fallout of that hurt. You have a fabulous cutting edge style I find admirable. Excellent write. H 🌷
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Re: Re. That's poetry
18th May 2020 10:31pm
Re. That's poetry
20th May 2020 2:39am
Awesome!!! Just a real Poet's poem for all us Poets, Ani.
Cheers...Harry
PS Have you ever read David Lerner's poem, "Mein Kampf"?
Cheers...Harry
PS Have you ever read David Lerner's poem, "Mein Kampf"?
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Re: Re. That's poetry
20th May 2020 3:39am
Hi Harry, thank you and no, I've not read it.
I imagine I can Google it? I'm not so well read when it comes to poetry. I'm just starting to find my appetite so I've been reading a lot recently. Trying to write some too.
I imagine I can Google it? I'm not so well read when it comes to poetry. I'm just starting to find my appetite so I've been reading a lot recently. Trying to write some too.
Re: Re. That's poetry
20th May 2020 11:02pm