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A Plea To The Divine
I call to the divine
with all my heart
Today let me feed my spirit
the feast is on the table
yet I've been starving my soul
While stuffing my flesh
plenty of food, trash t.v.
alcohol and weed
Hoping not to see
the skeletal remains of my being
I see now it's all up to me
stand up and fight
embrace life and the beauty that is
Love those around me
choose to allow the divine
to flow through me
While feeding my soul the sustenance
it so sorely needs
I know then and only then
will I truly know peace
Published 15th Jan 2012
| Edited 24th May 2016
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15th Jan 2012 7:32pm
Hey Crim !
Yeah, nice honest soulful write . Powerful
Pic as well .
Shine on Crimson !
Yeah, nice honest soulful write . Powerful
Pic as well .
Shine on Crimson !
15th Jan 2012 7:45pm
ty Eamon for your touching comment..I always smile when you stop by my page..you are kind hearted and intelligent it's clear in your writing you truly shine..peace Crim :)
15th Jan 2012 10:19pm
"I see now it's all up to me
stand up and fight
embrace life and the beauty that is"; yes ma'am this is all you need right here, bravo!!!
Gypsy red
stand up and fight
embrace life and the beauty that is"; yes ma'am this is all you need right here, bravo!!!
Gypsy red
18th Jan 2012 6:52pm
ty Gypsy for such a beautiful comment..I love your writing so I take your comments to heart..peace Crim :)
Crim,
You realize man can not live just on bread alone. You see you need spiritual enlightment from your heavenly father.
You emotions flow so nicely and that is why I love this piece.
Hugs to you.
You realize man can not live just on bread alone. You see you need spiritual enlightment from your heavenly father.
You emotions flow so nicely and that is why I love this piece.
Hugs to you.
18th Jan 2012 6:54pm
Hugs to you beautiful lady..ty you're right we need to seek our heavenly father..wishing you peace always Crim :)
16th Jan 2012 4:04am
soul searching and seeking redemption, a compelling poem of confession. Excellent write! jj
18th Jan 2012 6:55pm
ty JJ I love getting comments from such a soulful writer like you..peace Crim :)
17th Jan 2012 4:48pm
18th Jan 2012 6:56pm
I've never heard of him but i'll be sure to look him up..ty for the suggestion..peace Crim :)
21st Mar 2012 8:37pm
To me, this wonderful poem is mistitled. It ought to be a plea to yourself. On another front, why is your being "skeletal?" Isn't your being your being, with no form or shape? Being at peace, a psychological statis, and "being" are different, of course. I'm not sure, in reading the poem, which one you want. Both? Peacefulness is like the clouds--they come and go and we can observe them if we want. Grap peace for a while and see how fleeting it is. Peace will wander but it will return while you are watching. Good poem.
Marcella1
Marcella1
21st Mar 2012 8:40pm
