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Janelle (In The Morning......)
Salty beads of sweat
drip down upon my face
they flood my lips and
I taste you
you are passion,
sensuality
love
“Rain down on me
Let you're love just fall like rain drops”
my fingers crest your shoulders
falling down the sloping arch
of your back
rounding your hips
settling upon your thighs.......you straddle my body
…..in the early morning light, we gently ride
the throes of pleasures unspoken,
unfolding delights
your body shimmers
and undulates like the colors of
a popinjay's plume.....
inside you
so deep,
tongue and groove
this love we share
in the morning
(until you're gone and the colors seem to fade......)
Published 14th May 2020
| Edited 15th May 2020
Author's Note
..........my recurring dream, I will one day love you "Until the colors seem to fade" 👐🍑
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14th May 2020 1:02pm
15th May 2020 12:53pm
Love this one, its marvelous,
Shows a tender loving, caring, passionate side
Lucky her in the dream...
Shows a tender loving, caring, passionate side
Lucky her in the dream...
15th May 2020 3:35pm
22nd May 2020 10:03pm
No overt explicit body part descriptions
Very well manoeuvred by bringing us into the story
While we get lost in the action
Suddenly the reality of the morning comes and ends it all
Very well manoeuvred by bringing us into the story
While we get lost in the action
Suddenly the reality of the morning comes and ends it all
25th May 2020 1:45pm
