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For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
Cascade of light
Golden hair
Taking the most jaded
Spinning him like a top
Spring time
Paradise of thought
Whimsy
Embrace
Golden hair
Taking the most jaded
Spinning him like a top
Spring time
Paradise of thought
Whimsy
Embrace
Author's Note
Wisdom on Fire
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Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 00:04am
Re: Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 1:26am
It was a floaty kind of day
Sometimes you pull a line out of thin air ...
Thanks Daisy
Sometimes you pull a line out of thin air ...
Thanks Daisy
Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 1:17am
Beautifully done. You have a knack! So much conveyed in so few words. A gift I do not have. I admire yours.
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Re: Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 1:28am
Thank you Julia
I'm actually a wordy fuck at times
I practice writing leaner with just enough red meat
Appreciate your praise !
I'm actually a wordy fuck at times
I practice writing leaner with just enough red meat
Appreciate your praise !
Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 3:33am
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13th May 2020 3:48am
Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 8:43am
That was really beautiful, PoetSpeak :)
Great use of imagery in this little spill! I liked it a lot - short and sweet!
Great use of imagery in this little spill! I liked it a lot - short and sweet!
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Re: Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 12:37pm
Doing more with less
Pandemic like
Looks like my salary lately
Less
Thanks NB
Appreciate the nod
Pandemic like
Looks like my salary lately
Less
Thanks NB
Appreciate the nod
Re: Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 12:40pm
Yes, indeed, and you are most welcome! I understand the struggle. I am out of work at the moment myself. Perhaps the job prospects will look a bit better after all of this blows over. I wish you the best as well, keep your head up and keep on keepin' on ;)
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Re: Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 12:44pm
Back at ya NB
I'm still working but I work on commission and all my accounts are closed so it's funky
Beans and rice, a lot of them
Cheap and can be dressed up with other ingredients
Keep the faith !!
Thank you
I'm still working but I work on commission and all my accounts are closed so it's funky
Beans and rice, a lot of them
Cheap and can be dressed up with other ingredients
Keep the faith !!
Thank you
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13th May 2020 1:14pm
Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 1:28pm
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13th May 2020 1:30pm
I used to stay away from them
I thought I did better with dark and brooding
Then I discovered that there was no universal
So it's whatever works now ....
I thought I did better with dark and brooding
Then I discovered that there was no universal
So it's whatever works now ....
Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
Anonymous
13th May 2020 1:55pm
I don't know what brought this one to you, but I'm loving it! It caresses nicely
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13th May 2020 1:58pm
Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 8:53pm
I like the visuals implied here. Maybe it's because you post digital art along with other pieces that now I'm imagining colors and patterns.
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Re. For Her - For Him ( Redemption and Light )
13th May 2020 9:05pm