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10th May 2020 5:09pm
Wow. Your metaphors are the crux of the piece for me. Silence as a thickening fog grants it a tangible presence. The construction is rather unique and the emotional quality is palpable. I feel you. *hugs*
10th May 2020 11:15pm
10th May 2020 5:23pm
Hardcore Greatness Here!!!
This bites in right...the image used is quite striking along side WOW!!!
This bites in right...the image used is quite striking along side WOW!!!
10th May 2020 11:16pm
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12th May 2020 1:14pm
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13th May 2020 3:00am
More than an erotica poem. A testament to love gone bad told with your quintessential talent. Left an imprint long after reading.
Xo
John
Xo
John
