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Don’t Feel Alive
This existence is flawed
I breathe
But don’t feel alive
No scraping
The darkness from my soul
Closer to the voices
That spout hate
Try to control
In my veins
Flows depression
Crave things
To cover the deep void
Love, sex never fills it
Just a shadow
Of self destruction
I breathe
But don’t feel alive
No scraping
The darkness from my soul
Closer to the voices
That spout hate
Try to control
In my veins
Flows depression
Crave things
To cover the deep void
Love, sex never fills it
Just a shadow
Of self destruction
Published 9th May 2020
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9th May 2020 4:24pm
Amen to that, AP. Sex is not fulfilling outside of love, which is why some people crave it incessantly. Hoping brighter days are ahead for you, and the Universe matches your desire for someone to love and who will in return love you for your heart.
9th May 2020 5:07pm
9th May 2020 6:36pm
" Love, sex never fills it " <<<<<----------- EXACTLY!!! it's why, if one desires a relationship, i must have intimacy over love and or sex!!
I crave intimacy but most are not willing to go that far or that deep.
It's why vibrations like (us?) are often alone.
I crave intimacy but most are not willing to go that far or that deep.
It's why vibrations like (us?) are often alone.
9th May 2020 6:50pm
9th May 2020 7:40pm
Always fill your holes with Love for someone or something, not with something or someone who professes to love.
Yes, I went there.
Yes, I went there.
