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Stuck in my Mind
Trapped inside my mind
Can anyone save me
I feel so alone here
Stuck with myself
All by myself
I reach out for a hand to hold
To no avail the emptiness stays
How can I get out of here with my sanity
This is where I lose my sanity
These rhymes and rhythms can't hold my words
I feel too much for words to express
I want to leave and fly
Take the jump and learn to fly
Can anyone save me
I feel so alone here
Stuck with myself
All by myself
I reach out for a hand to hold
To no avail the emptiness stays
How can I get out of here with my sanity
This is where I lose my sanity
These rhymes and rhythms can't hold my words
I feel too much for words to express
I want to leave and fly
Take the jump and learn to fly
Published 3rd May 2020
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3rd May 2020 10:12pm
4th May 2020 3:39am
Dear EE,
A very raw and intense piece. There is nothing lonelier at times than being stuck in your own head and hearing all the negative voices. I wish I could serve them eviction notices. Your last phrase “I want to leave and fly
Take the jump and learn to fly” for me, gives hope that inner strength will rule the day. Welcome to DU. Powerful write.
H🌷
A very raw and intense piece. There is nothing lonelier at times than being stuck in your own head and hearing all the negative voices. I wish I could serve them eviction notices. Your last phrase “I want to leave and fly
Take the jump and learn to fly” for me, gives hope that inner strength will rule the day. Welcome to DU. Powerful write.
H🌷
