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It IS Fine Right?

late Night
that's fine
i'll just think about
how crazy my life is
that's fine
i need some time to myself
that's fine
but to afraid to be alone with my thoughts
that's fine
that's right
seriously, i know it's not good for my health
but hey
what can you do right
i'm just living live like everybody else
and just like everybody else
i try to put up a good fight
yup that's right
that's fine
they say some people's pain
is worse than others
but....
people don't see what they aren't  looking for....
pain is pain
no matter the depth
yeah i said it
and that's fine
and no one hears a scream....
unless it's loud.....
that's right...
i guess that's fine...
unity begins when....
others hear the cries all over....
then take reasonable action...
yes, that's fine
when others here
 not just the ones...
who are CLEARLY in pain
 but...
who sit silently.....
grieving all in there lonesome space
crying for days
casting shame after shame
but....yeah....
i guess that's fine too.....




Written by KrystalG
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Author's Note
It's past midnight, had a bit trouble sleeping so I thought I should see what I could come up with at the top of my head. And even though it was so spare of the moment it still had a deep meaning, and I actually like how it turned out. Would love to here you're thoughts if this connected with you in some way!<3
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