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Remember Death
Remember me. For I am with you always.
In your infancy I whispered sweet lullabies.
In your youth I was the voice daring you
to seek and explore.
When you came of age, I filled your soul with love.
And soon your seasoned ears
became receptive of my song.
Remember me as you march onward,
and do not be afraid
when the time comes to sing along.
©Tanzen Lilly 4/7/20
In your infancy I whispered sweet lullabies.
In your youth I was the voice daring you
to seek and explore.
When you came of age, I filled your soul with love.
And soon your seasoned ears
became receptive of my song.
Remember me as you march onward,
and do not be afraid
when the time comes to sing along.
©Tanzen Lilly 4/7/20
Published 30th Apr 2020
Author's Note
This is sort of a rough draft so any notes are appreciated.
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1st May 2020 00:12am
1st May 2020 6:08am
I honestly am so moved by this. So many people fear death. It’s this scary illusive thinhvthay looms over us all. But your piece presents death as this positive thing, almost carrying us through life. What a unique take. Keep going with that.
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- Edited 15th May 2020 2:45pm
4th May 2020 2:54am
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