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Hold me
Baby
i'll softly hold your hands
whisper my voice in your
ears
i need you to listen,
i wouldn't steal your heart,
but i will steal your
tears.
i wouldn't steal your
heart,
But i will steal your
hurt.
i'll steal your fears.
i'll softly hold your hands
whisper my voice in your
ears
i need you to listen,
i wouldn't steal your heart,
but i will steal your
tears.
i wouldn't steal your
heart,
But i will steal your
hurt.
i'll steal your fears.
Published 28th Apr 2020
| Edited 2nd May 2020
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29th Apr 2020 4:05am
Dear R,
Beautiful write. I like how all the yuck parts of the human emotional system are covered and protected. That’s a great deal of kindness and lucky is that person to be loved in this manner. Great write. H🌷
Beautiful write. I like how all the yuck parts of the human emotional system are covered and protected. That’s a great deal of kindness and lucky is that person to be loved in this manner. Great write. H🌷
2nd May 2020 9:18am
Dear H,
Thank you so much.
I like the way you decipher the message in my piece.
One Love to you.
Thank you so much.
I like the way you decipher the message in my piece.
One Love to you.
1st Jun 2020 6:33am
Very nicely done Rickji. It conveys the emotion of love and care one can give and do for another.
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