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My immortal
The satin wrapped universe
enclosed itself around me
like a pulsating, peacock breast womb
connected to the source by the cord
I
floated across and the placenta
bloomed and bled into endless rhapsody
You
gyrated in enchanting cosmic dance
in the distance
kingdom of eternal ether
and a random assembly of pulsars
in between
You and me
swirling-losing-blending
ever so slowly in
the undying resonance of your truth
reverberated inside
I
traversed, breathing
an ecstasy of majestic awareness
I
glided into your being
like an inspired trapeze artist
and the blinking dots connected
to form a profound formlessness
You
bloomed within me
The shrine and the spirit
coalesced in conjugation-
hypnotic
until space lost dimension
and the trinity was but a dot-
a seed of immortal harmony
and the giant greenspread
of a sapling
The black hole where
unified fields of space
combined into a vista
Yab and Yum-Yin and Yang-You and me
fused beyond death and dimension
alternate dreamspell of elegiac reality-
from here to infinity.
Published 13th Jan 2012
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13th Jan 2012 5:56pm
but you should scale this back a little. The birth meataphors and references to the universe were great, but the oceanic images are too much, and donŽt really work with the rest of the poem. Minus all the dolphin and conch shell refernces its another great piece of art by yourself
13th Jan 2012 8:20pm
M
:)Thank you for speaking
your mind. So we have the
first draft here with the
edits.
I now understand the previous,
raw write was a litte too much.
Glad you liked it.
Curtsy,
S'
:)Thank you for speaking
your mind. So we have the
first draft here with the
edits.
I now understand the previous,
raw write was a litte too much.
Glad you liked it.
Curtsy,
S'
13th Jan 2012 6:07pm
I love you...um i mean your poetry!!...;) Its so beautiful an magical the way u put it altogether.:)
13th Jan 2012 8:22pm
Lyrical Lady
Why thank you for stopping by.
Glad you liked it.:)
Curtsy,
S'
Why thank you for stopping by.
Glad you liked it.:)
Curtsy,
S'
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Sep 2018 6:45am
14th Jan 2012 7:25am
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14th Jan 2012 10:05am
V
Thank you as ever.
For stopping by and
showing the continual
support.
Glad you enjoyed it.
S'
Thank you as ever.
For stopping by and
showing the continual
support.
Glad you enjoyed it.
S'
