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Succinctly Sweet.
I miss your touch
Your flesh
and bone
I miss the way
you remind me of home.
Your flesh
and bone
I miss the way
you remind me of home.
Published 27th Apr 2020
Author's Note
You're far away (over 6 feet) but near to my heart.
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27th Apr 2020 00:47am
Sounds like an excellent start to a song :)
I liked it a lot, and I think the title you selected suits it quite nicely!
Keep up the great writing, and best wishes...
-NewB
I liked it a lot, and I think the title you selected suits it quite nicely!
Keep up the great writing, and best wishes...
-NewB
28th Apr 2020 5:04am
Under my blanket of love,
I'll keep your heart warm
Don't you worry
I'll shelter you
through the storm..
Yeah, I'm definitely catching a melody there.
Thank you <3
I'll keep your heart warm
Don't you worry
I'll shelter you
through the storm..
Yeah, I'm definitely catching a melody there.
Thank you <3
27th Apr 2020 1:02am
