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Senryu
Impatient
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Impatient
rushed by his hunger
he devours her tasty parts
tasting saltiness
Written by
Kinkpoet
Published
25th Apr 2020
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#erotic
#lust
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#senryu
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Re. Impatient
Phantom2426
(Francisco J Vera)
25th Apr 2020 8:04am
You keep eating out that woman. Damn I mean that in a good naughty way. Keep on writing.
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Kinkpoet
25th Apr 2020 3:50pm
🙏
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SweetOblivion
25th Apr 2020 11:01am
I hope her basted
parts were as well done as you
would have wished for - smiles
(not sure about tasty and tasting in the same verses)
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Re: Re. Impatient
Kinkpoet
29th Apr 2020 2:05am
basted and tasted
tender parts were well done
although you are rare
i appreciate your poetic commentary.
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SweetOblivion
29th Apr 2020 5:50pm
I would say that I
do appreciate all your
appreciation
But I got rather
severely spanked, the last time
I dared to say that
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Re: Re. Impatient
Kinkpoet
29th Apr 2020 9:11pm
spankings can be fun
foreplay to tastes and basting
depends on intent
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SweetOblivion
29th Apr 2020 9:16pm
Fun is also spanks,
And both the palms can give thanks;
(Don't be firing blanks).
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Re. Impatient
robert43041
(Viking)
3rd Oct 2020 7:38pm
Salty can be good......though sometimes fishy.
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