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Driving Down Gratiot
The sky had fallen
it was almost night
so it was expected.
No real surprises,
just predictable patterns.
it was almost night
so it was expected.
No real surprises,
just predictable patterns.
Published 23rd Apr 2020
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23rd Apr 2020 3:32pm
23rd Apr 2020 3:51pm
Your process intrigues ... Resulting in wonderful pics and great writes ... Yes ... Bless and much love ...
23rd Apr 2020 7:00pm
Dear N,
Gorgeous. Love the scene pictured by the words. Love the words accompanied by the pictures. “so it was expected” something about that line that hits the piece home. Beautiful write. H🌷
Gorgeous. Love the scene pictured by the words. Love the words accompanied by the pictures. “so it was expected” something about that line that hits the piece home. Beautiful write. H🌷
23rd Apr 2020 10:53pm
24th Apr 2020 10:57am
In the night reality becomes vivid... perception is with a different eye. The senses are fed and content... great write Nick...
