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Atmosphere
Words
are always
a poor substitute
for what one
is thinking
without the rhythm
of what one is
feeling
for what ever the language
it can never come close
to what one
is truely feeling
when one feels
an atmosphere
that's been cut
that's still weeping
with the pain
from the knife
are always
a poor substitute
for what one
is thinking
without the rhythm
of what one is
feeling
for what ever the language
it can never come close
to what one
is truely feeling
when one feels
an atmosphere
that's been cut
that's still weeping
with the pain
from the knife
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