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Love (4-5-4 Haiku)
I wait for you
even when I know
you’re not coming.
R.
even when I know
you’re not coming.
R.
Published 17th Apr 2020
Author's Note
Isn’t love just the most beautiful tragedy of them all?!..
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17th Apr 2020 5:10am
17th Apr 2020 7:27pm
♥️.... Heartbreak, indeed... such a beautiful part of daring to love big... honored for the RL add, NB :). R.
20th Apr 2020 6:24pm
18th Apr 2020 3:55am
Yes; it can be if you allow it to stay too long, as an unwelcome guest.
It's simply preparing you for the next; what did you learn from this?
Lovely offering, Rachelle!
It's simply preparing you for the next; what did you learn from this?
Lovely offering, Rachelle!
18th Apr 2020 4:59pm
Ahh, thank you, Ahavati. My favorite way of thinking about love is as the ‘unconditional embrace of the inevitable’ (I think that is Adyashanti). The unconditionality part is a learning that finally feels embedded. Acceptance of the inevitable is likely one I get to learn and relearn and relearn... :)
18th Apr 2020 5:13pm
10th Jun 2020 5:34pm
13th Jun 2020 11:21am
Expressing the passions and torments of love in a few words is daunting. I’ve never seen a 4/5/4 haiku before. Well done! 🌹😘
14th Feb 2021 6:19am
Didn’t see this until just now on this Valentine’s Eve. Many thanks for the sweet words. 🙏🏽♥️, Rachelle
10th Jul 2020 8:45am
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