Hope (acrostic)

Very nice, Slip!

balloons * won't* life's*

Best of luck in the comp!

Beautiful entry, slip! Other than the typos that Ahavati pointed out, it's a beautiful poem :)

Keep up the great work!

Compiling these on the art work site is a hard challenge for me  but then I do have the time to play, Thank you so for the compliment  Hope 0.2 arriving soon

I think you're doing a good job, slip... leaving a legacy :)
I hope my criticisms were well received and that you are having a wonderful day!

Nice write. I like the feeling of flying on a zepher breeze.