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mise en place
tendon in the wheelhouse
butter sings
roadkill sonnets
lack of jaw
bonesaw syntax
just give me the words
there were too many stars...
go back to the ocean
back to sun
push a drill
through me
for core samples
count the extinction events
sinew on the running board
world mise en place
mandible gone
belly full of lullaby, mouth full of stars
you are somewhere
at the bottom of this bottle
you have to be
butter sings
roadkill sonnets
lack of jaw
bonesaw syntax
just give me the words
there were too many stars...
go back to the ocean
back to sun
push a drill
through me
for core samples
count the extinction events
sinew on the running board
world mise en place
mandible gone
belly full of lullaby, mouth full of stars
you are somewhere
at the bottom of this bottle
you have to be
Published 15th Apr 2020
| Edited 28th May 2022
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Very creative, interesting, and expressive. I loved this, Bryan! What incredible writing :)
"push a drill
through me
for core samples.
count the extinction events."
Freakin' genious line, brother. The pain of a thousand heartbreaks,
Sorry you are feeling lonely and sad... maybe this comment will cheer you up.
I suffer from depression, so I understand sadness on a deeper level...
Currently having a split with my fiancee as well, so there's that.
Anyway... I feel your struggle.
"push a drill
through me
for core samples.
count the extinction events."
Freakin' genious line, brother. The pain of a thousand heartbreaks,
Sorry you are feeling lonely and sad... maybe this comment will cheer you up.
I suffer from depression, so I understand sadness on a deeper level...
Currently having a split with my fiancee as well, so there's that.
Anyway... I feel your struggle.
Thanks for the kind words. We are passenger to emotion. How we choose to process our journey is on us. Stay resilient.
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I have often told myself someone was at the bottom of a bottle. Unfortunately, I’ve never found them there.
I absolutely adore “belly full of lullaby, mouth full of stars” stunning imagery.
I absolutely adore “belly full of lullaby, mouth full of stars” stunning imagery.
