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Wash Me Away
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
As I stand in the rain naked I let the water hit my face as it trickles down my body, I start to picture your face in my mind while thinking about you I try to remember a simpler time where I thought you used to be the one for me, a time where you didn’t hurt me so easily. As I try to get your memory out of my brain I start feeling the rain lightly drip down on my bare skin;
Feeling so relaxed yet still feeling some agony I sing to myself softly “ rain, rain please wash away my pain for me and don’t let me hurt again”.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
I can’t feel nothing anymore, but then again I didn’t feel anything to begin with after I met you.
When I said I didn’t love you anymore I lied, I loved you so deeply it nearly almost killed me but you didn’t care you just wasted my time and became the toxic venom that ran through my veins that nearly poisoned me.
As I shed a tear I feel both numb yet disconnected as I wipe my tears away I start to walk on the beach; I feel the wet sand in between my toes and under my feet as it feels so gentle yet so smooth it comforts me then I head to the water and dive in.
I feel my body is floating away and I’m not afraid of drowning anymore so I let my body sink down into the water while the last thing that’s going through my head is you.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Flashes from the past to present go by fast as I let my body sink a little bit further and let the waves pull me in then spit me out as they angrily wash down shore.
The more aggressive the waves became the least likely I was willing to fight to save my life for I didn’t want to fight anymore so I’ll drift away into the sea until I’m no longer of reach.
But before I leave I have one thing to say that I’d like you to remember and that is no matter what I’ll always want you whether in my past life or present life I would fight for you and I would die for you, but I knew you never loved me the same way so I’ll end my suffering the best way possible and become one with myself instead, but I hope one day you and I will meet again together someday.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
As I stand in the rain naked I let the water hit my face as it trickles down my body, I start to picture your face in my mind while thinking about you I try to remember a simpler time where I thought you used to be the one for me, a time where you didn’t hurt me so easily. As I try to get your memory out of my brain I start feeling the rain lightly drip down on my bare skin;
Feeling so relaxed yet still feeling some agony I sing to myself softly “ rain, rain please wash away my pain for me and don’t let me hurt again”.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
I can’t feel nothing anymore, but then again I didn’t feel anything to begin with after I met you.
When I said I didn’t love you anymore I lied, I loved you so deeply it nearly almost killed me but you didn’t care you just wasted my time and became the toxic venom that ran through my veins that nearly poisoned me.
As I shed a tear I feel both numb yet disconnected as I wipe my tears away I start to walk on the beach; I feel the wet sand in between my toes and under my feet as it feels so gentle yet so smooth it comforts me then I head to the water and dive in.
I feel my body is floating away and I’m not afraid of drowning anymore so I let my body sink down into the water while the last thing that’s going through my head is you.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Flashes from the past to present go by fast as I let my body sink a little bit further and let the waves pull me in then spit me out as they angrily wash down shore.
The more aggressive the waves became the least likely I was willing to fight to save my life for I didn’t want to fight anymore so I’ll drift away into the sea until I’m no longer of reach.
But before I leave I have one thing to say that I’d like you to remember and that is no matter what I’ll always want you whether in my past life or present life I would fight for you and I would die for you, but I knew you never loved me the same way so I’ll end my suffering the best way possible and become one with myself instead, but I hope one day you and I will meet again together someday.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Wash me away,
Wash me away,
Wash me away.
Cleanse me from head to toe and make me feel whole again.
Published 12th Apr 2020
Author's Note
I wrote this three days ago and was inspired by looking at the rain outside my window and also my recent breakup I went through. So I hope you like it let me know what you think about it. ~ Ms Jackson
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12th Apr 2020 9:52am
Very inspiring and uplifting words to describe the feelings of being alone with the process of the rain as it easy away the pain of a sudden loss of love to the heart and soul nicely composed dear poetess..respect
12th Apr 2020 9:54am
12th Apr 2020 10:17am
Yes indeed anything that can uplift the depth of the heart and soul is worth expressing for you never know what someone else may be going through within their own lives for after all knowledge is power in the eyes of an awaken soul..respect dear poetess
12th Apr 2020 1:17pm
This is a painful way of dealing with a relationship where there were high hopes of success but the outcome was failure.
There's always new beginnings around the corner but the lows can feel like the end is nigh.
There are lessons to be learnt from others and this opportunity to examine the situation can also bring wisdom.
The rain may be a symbol of cleansing the past to make space for what is to come in the future.
The noticeable use of 3 stanzas to emphasize the message and then placing the 3 paragraphs to tell the story inside.
The organization of the whole poem came across in a unique and distinctive way and was uncomplicated.
Respect to the OG of DU poetry
There's always new beginnings around the corner but the lows can feel like the end is nigh.
There are lessons to be learnt from others and this opportunity to examine the situation can also bring wisdom.
The rain may be a symbol of cleansing the past to make space for what is to come in the future.
The noticeable use of 3 stanzas to emphasize the message and then placing the 3 paragraphs to tell the story inside.
The organization of the whole poem came across in a unique and distinctive way and was uncomplicated.
Respect to the OG of DU poetry
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12th Apr 2020 11:04pm
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14th Apr 2020 6:21am
Very emotional and heartfelt, Ms.💔
Thank you for sharing this... I really liked it.
Thank you for sharing this... I really liked it.
14th Apr 2020 7:29am
