Freestyle Verses (Rap)

A lyrical anomaly
An emperical error
Not for mom to see
To spare her from terror
Iím on this beat
Like an overlord
on overload
Iíve gone overboard
Like a croakiní toad
With spoken load
In broken code
I break barriers
Iím passionately
On the issue
Not chasing paper
Like toilet tissue
Politically, analytically
Literally gone viral
This spiral
Is vital
For evolution
A revolution
A pivotal...
Change the way your mind thinks
Pull the drain and let your mind sink
Rest your body and your soul, friend
This is out of our control, man.
Written by NewBeginnings
Author's Note
I had a lot of fun with this... sort of an improvisation. I decided to write a rap completely from the top of my head, and this is what I came up with. No edits, no objectives, almost no grammar, just straight from the top of my head. EXCEPT for the end.

If anyone's curious, I was inspired by this video:
I think any poet would find it interesting. In-depth discussion of poetic techniques in rap.
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