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My Greatest Find
You are the break in the darkness, my light
You are the one that fill my dreams at night.
You're the only one who can really hurt me,
And in a room full of people you're the only one i see....
you are a mystery to my mind,
And yet you are my greatest find.....
You are the one that fill my dreams at night.
You're the only one who can really hurt me,
And in a room full of people you're the only one i see....
you are a mystery to my mind,
And yet you are my greatest find.....
Published 11th Jan 2012
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2nd Feb 2012 4:55am
Short and sweet, much said in so little wording. I like the poem, I can relate..Good work :)
5th Feb 2012 9:22pm
...short, sweet....to the point! You used the perfect words in the most perfect order. Keep up the good work!!
6th Feb 2012 11:09pm
