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mountain symbol
Leave a cherry on the mountain top,
If it’s space you need, you’ve got-
(-golden white rivers flow out of me-)
Quarantine
Shelter in place
I want to go towards your face
Cuz that’s where reality is.
A river between mirrors
Of fear and loneliness.
One safe place
Your island in the stream
I’d sit and wait
Pen n rifle, shadow n light beam
Your pain's got something to say-
And temperance has faith
Mountain symbols of release
On the other side of pain
Love is safe
If it’s space you need, you’ve got-
(-golden white rivers flow out of me-)
Quarantine
Shelter in place
I want to go towards your face
Cuz that’s where reality is.
A river between mirrors
Of fear and loneliness.
One safe place
Your island in the stream
I’d sit and wait
Pen n rifle, shadow n light beam
Your pain's got something to say-
And temperance has faith
Mountain symbols of release
On the other side of pain
Love is safe
Published 10th Apr 2020
| Edited 16th May 2020
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10th Apr 2020 7:18am
It is hard to love someone from long distance because of this frenzy. If you truly you fing a way to make it work. Keep on writing.
Goddamn girl. This is one hell of an insightful sexy poem. Beautifully wriiten all kinds of symbolism.
Your island in the stream
I’d sit and wait
Pen n rifle, shadow n light beam
Your pain's got something to say-
I think we may kindred souls. Thank you for the write.
Your island in the stream
I’d sit and wait
Pen n rifle, shadow n light beam
Your pain's got something to say-
I think we may kindred souls. Thank you for the write.
11th Apr 2020 6:47am
EEEE!!! (that's my really excited squeal sound that i make but there's not a real word for) Geez, thank you. I'm so glad you liked it - kindred souls for certain. :)
What a time to meet but this outpouring is a gladdening read, a glimpse of the romantic spirit. When you're in love in any adversity (eg war, slump etc) romance will spur the mind to look for the best life can show. Favourite lines:
Quarantine
Shelter in place
I want to go towards your face
Cuz that’s where reality is.
A river between mirrors
Of fear and loneliness.
One safe place
Your island in the stream
I agree with the line 'If it's space you need you've got it'. Welcome-able to those who don't like being among crowds.
Quarantine
Shelter in place
I want to go towards your face
Cuz that’s where reality is.
A river between mirrors
Of fear and loneliness.
One safe place
Your island in the stream
I agree with the line 'If it's space you need you've got it'. Welcome-able to those who don't like being among crowds.
19th Dec 2020 1:01am
Such a succulent face!
Really though, this hits home. Even introverts are having a hard time with the virus.
Really though, this hits home. Even introverts are having a hard time with the virus.
