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His wants My needs
His wants my needs
Uncomprised defeat of words
Disconcerted by my tender illicit deeds
In the throne of madness
Blind eyes closed in muted tones
The warmth of a touch softening the sadness
Embossing his forgotten signature upon the appeal of my fragile heart
Love has been signed, sealed, and delivered
A woman always wins the part
Uncomprised defeat of words
Disconcerted by my tender illicit deeds
In the throne of madness
Blind eyes closed in muted tones
The warmth of a touch softening the sadness
Embossing his forgotten signature upon the appeal of my fragile heart
Love has been signed, sealed, and delivered
A woman always wins the part
Published 8th Apr 2020
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8th Apr 2020 9:01pm
Life is always happier when two people are in love.
Nothing can come between them if they face life together.
A woman is the leading lady in her man's life.
Nothing can come between them if they face life together.
A woman is the leading lady in her man's life.
9th Apr 2020 2:59am
Please allow me to add... Yes, 'a woman is the leading lady in her man's life' nonetheless, if she is the only woman his heart is centered upon, and thank you in advance, sir
9th Apr 2020 3:15am
Ma'am,
I said what I said because at the end your poem you said, "A woman always wins the part" and that for beckoned a victory for the lady I was not aware of the point you just made now that seems to suggest or infer that the lady lost in love due to the man's transgressions.
I also thank you in advance
I said what I said because at the end your poem you said, "A woman always wins the part" and that for beckoned a victory for the lady I was not aware of the point you just made now that seems to suggest or infer that the lady lost in love due to the man's transgressions.
I also thank you in advance
9th Apr 2020 3:26am
I will accept in reverence, sir, I was only saying in times, a lady can be, and will always be, if his love is true to face obstacles together, and you are welcome
