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Blood
I can Smell blood
Looking for you
Need your blood
Drown in my heart
keep you safe
Keep you warm
Your love I adore
Might not breathe
Something easily ignored
Build you a Barbie dream house
Doll face keep Smiling
Behind locked doors
Didn’t know plastic could feel
Don’t feel the nerve to leave
Or I’ll Hurt you some more
Come back inside
Melt some plastic
Burn me perfect lasting kiss
Looking for you
Need your blood
Drown in my heart
keep you safe
Keep you warm
Your love I adore
Might not breathe
Something easily ignored
Build you a Barbie dream house
Doll face keep Smiling
Behind locked doors
Didn’t know plastic could feel
Don’t feel the nerve to leave
Or I’ll Hurt you some more
Come back inside
Melt some plastic
Burn me perfect lasting kiss
Published 6th Apr 2020
| Edited 10th Jun 2020
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6th Apr 2020 8:40am
Interesting write,
I definitely enjoyed reading it the only thing though I’m curious about what inspired this?
I definitely enjoyed reading it the only thing though I’m curious about what inspired this?
6th Apr 2020 9:04am
I grew watching a lot of movies like
the bastard out of North Carolina
And seen people in abusive relationships
So I guess I like writing about it
the bastard out of North Carolina
And seen people in abusive relationships
So I guess I like writing about it
6th Apr 2020 9:25am
Well define liking to write about it because honestly it’s a pretty sad subject so are you just interested in it or do you just like it?
6th Apr 2020 9:57am
I don’t like it, and to help get that kind of negativity out of my mind I write about it
6th Apr 2020 10:04am
Oh good I was making sure ‘cause I was confused and I thought you were saying you liked it in a positive way
6th Apr 2020 10:18am
But yeah I can relate I had relatives who went through domestic violence and I’ve also had a few friends who went through it so I understand it I’ve never been hit by a guy like that but I’ve put up with some verbal stuff in one relationship
6th Apr 2020 11:42am
6th Apr 2020 7:35pm
True I’ve written on that subject here and there and even made a poem about it if you want to check it out it’s called “ Monster” I written another about domestic violence/rape but have no clue what it was called even after looking through my long list I can’t remember sadly
7th Apr 2020 9:59am
7th Apr 2020 10:02am
