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The faster I run, the less further I get
spring has grown
fangs and is going
for the throat of man
and i want to go home
and sleep for a year
our lives are finger
food for God
and I haven't washed
my hair in three days
thoughts are a cul
de sac
feeling a morgue
the human spirit
goes down like
cheap whiskey
and burns
out of our
minds
out of time
out goes the
lights
and the dark sits
in the corner licking
it's lips,
a hungry
cat
.
04/05/11:08am/est
Published 5th Apr 2020
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Excellent , Buddha Kitty !
I loved these three sections together :
*the human spirit
goes down like
cheap whiskey
and burns
out of our
minds
out of time*
As well , this :
*and the dark sits
in the corner licking
it's lips,
a hungry
cat*
Well phrased and laid down for all...;)
I loved these three sections together :
*the human spirit
goes down like
cheap whiskey
and burns
out of our
minds
out of time*
As well , this :
*and the dark sits
in the corner licking
it's lips,
a hungry
cat*
Well phrased and laid down for all...;)
5th Apr 2020 9:08pm
Thank you so much Blackwolf. It means a great deal to me that you found something meaningful in my work
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
5th Apr 2020 9:37pm
5th Apr 2020 10:18pm
5th Apr 2020 9:37pm
I can see that fellow in the corner now...
you build a fine picture, you do
One might say that you have a light approach to a dark subject... nicely done
kittybud...hugz, Ely
you build a fine picture, you do
One might say that you have a light approach to a dark subject... nicely done
kittybud...hugz, Ely
5th Apr 2020 10:20pm
6th Apr 2020 1:21am
When death smiles...the best one can do is smile back. Great ink Kitty.
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
6th Apr 2020 1:27am
28th Sep 2020 3:38am
...and it is waiting for you right around the corner. Nicely done. I like. Regards, Robert.
28th Sep 2020 4:17am
