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Tracing Stars
Careful distance tarnished
Embraced inhibition
Single moment lost
Blissful comprehension
Sharpened a reaction
Dragged across the chest
Explore a tender thread
Pull it loose, whisper, "Yes"
Just… yes.
Stay
Breathless moment.
Pull it tighter.
Trace the stars of my own desire
Score the backs of stolen glances
Feeding into slow advances.
Danger. Absolute.
Stay anyway
Find you under moonlight
Warm and ever strong
Bring you closer to me
Lines blurred everlong
Melted. Fuck it
Lips like feathers
Fingers take flight
Feverish desire
Inhale the night
Yes
The beauty of it wild and cannot be held back
The beast within me wakened
Hunger slung across her back
Feather turns to stone
Your excitement swells and shifts
A nibble doesn't satisfy
When my mouth finds your hips
Sweet and gently stolen
Every shadow kissed
Fingers interlocked
Compel you to resist
Gripped. Motionless
Breathing hard anticipation
Let it build. Just let it build
Poise my tongue to coax ovation
High on your intensity
Crave the taste of your release
Feel you tense and soften for me
Soothe the savage beast
Embraced inhibition
Single moment lost
Blissful comprehension
Sharpened a reaction
Dragged across the chest
Explore a tender thread
Pull it loose, whisper, "Yes"
Just… yes.
Stay
Breathless moment.
Pull it tighter.
Trace the stars of my own desire
Score the backs of stolen glances
Feeding into slow advances.
Danger. Absolute.
Stay anyway
Find you under moonlight
Warm and ever strong
Bring you closer to me
Lines blurred everlong
Melted. Fuck it
Lips like feathers
Fingers take flight
Feverish desire
Inhale the night
Yes
The beauty of it wild and cannot be held back
The beast within me wakened
Hunger slung across her back
Feather turns to stone
Your excitement swells and shifts
A nibble doesn't satisfy
When my mouth finds your hips
Sweet and gently stolen
Every shadow kissed
Fingers interlocked
Compel you to resist
Gripped. Motionless
Breathing hard anticipation
Let it build. Just let it build
Poise my tongue to coax ovation
High on your intensity
Crave the taste of your release
Feel you tense and soften for me
Soothe the savage beast
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Re. Tracing Stars
1st Apr 2020 5:55am
i don't normally follow erotic spills
however, this is superbly crafted
and tasteful (no pun intended)
however, this is superbly crafted
and tasteful (no pun intended)
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1st Apr 2020 6:20am
Re. Tracing Stars
1st Apr 2020 6:34am
Like the rhyming and the sensual tone. Favourite verse:
High on your intensity
Crave the taste of your release
Feel you tense and soften for me
Soothe the savage beast
High on your intensity
Crave the taste of your release
Feel you tense and soften for me
Soothe the savage beast
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1st Apr 2020 6:38am
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Re. Tracing Stars
1st Apr 2020 6:35am
No disrespect but your poem is turning me on. I wish I was there with you, Lol. Keep on writing.
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1st Apr 2020 6:37am
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Re. Tracing Stars
1st Apr 2020 9:12pm
I feel the fire as well as your spiritual connection to the universe of transaction between love of the heart and soul with a deep sensual overtone nicely composed dear poetess..respect
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1st Apr 2020 10:14pm
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Re. Tracing Stars
3rd Apr 2020 5:51am
Magnificent and sensual. A very colorful depiction of desire and sexual satisfaction. Love your imagination here. Tell me more, show me more of your delightful inkspill.😇
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Re. Tracing Stars
25th Aug 2020 9:37am
Just loved it, passions, desires, loves
Everything and more. Great job
Ron x
Everything and more. Great job
Ron x
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