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The Esteem Train
Wipe away the mould
that covers the steps of gold
buy back the thoughts you sold
then learn all
that you've been told
Its time to carry out
the life you had on hold
its time to iron away
the rut of where you lay , jump up to unfold
Its now time to proove your wheels
are ready to be rolled .
Climb aboard
the esteem train
and sit as a lord
and be a bit vain
you've turned it around
now tell all the putters down
its your sound
and its coming to their town .
Now your travelling
on tracks of parallel
you can start unravelling
the untied string
that tied the sacks
to a past life
a gone wife
you can sing
no more manipulating
and hypocritical
wrongfully aristocritical
ministering
or cowardice
from anal talkers of oraphice
free from their bullying
and bigotted female predjudice.
So you can press
my button
none the less
your welcome
you've the address
I await the esteem train to come
and roll to the caress ,
of my
united kingdom .
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Published 13th Jan 2010
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20th Jul 2011 3:22pm
I have to confess I haven't read much of your stuff but I know you're a big fan of effortless rhyming. I think this one started off pretty well but it seems to run out of steam half way through.
I like the concept and message of the poem, I think the title sums it all up really well.
For what it's worth I found this poem through the webmistresses reading challenge.
I like the concept and message of the poem, I think the title sums it all up really well.
For what it's worth I found this poem through the webmistresses reading challenge.
26th Jul 2011 4:21am
well I did that poem a while back really and yeah it's not one of my best although it has a point to it and I appreciate your comment regardless of how or why you came across it you know and maybe read some of my other stuff , you might like it ha ha ha
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