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February
you were a winter love
and it was quite as cold
as your heart
and it was quite as cold
as your heart
Published 30th Mar 2020
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Dear A,
Lovely write. I read it quite a few times and each time I kept picturing a stark February scene with an icy cold smile from a very handsome stranger. Loved it even though it scared me a little :-). You’ve done a wonderful job creating such an image in so few words. Well done. H 🌷
Lovely write. I read it quite a few times and each time I kept picturing a stark February scene with an icy cold smile from a very handsome stranger. Loved it even though it scared me a little :-). You’ve done a wonderful job creating such an image in so few words. Well done. H 🌷
31st Mar 2020 10:40am
♥thank you,
and that's exactly how it went down, but I was the stranger with the cold smile,
that is the fun part about poetry, you never know from which point of view is written, but you are free to imagine ♥
and that's exactly how it went down, but I was the stranger with the cold smile,
that is the fun part about poetry, you never know from which point of view is written, but you are free to imagine ♥
31st Mar 2020 5:16am
