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i want my man to think...
I want my man to...
Think about touching me
Find something beautiful about me
No matter my momentary appearance
To think I'm sexy
Even when I'm a mess
To let me know it
To reach out even in the dullness of living
Make me feel appreciated
And I want his...
Man-parts to swell
Desire mounting an attack
Scrotum in full-metal mode
Thinking of me
I want a man who...
Cares about my pain
Who doesn't ignore me
When I'm in the room
Who looks at me
And away from ipad or tv
"are you ok" or "how are you sweetie"
Superficial in nature
Mean nothing to me
I want my man to...
Think about touching me
Get steely between his legs
Think I'm sexy no matter how I look
Find something beautiful about me
Let me know it
Make me feel appreciated
Think about touching me
Find something beautiful about me
No matter my momentary appearance
To think I'm sexy
Even when I'm a mess
To let me know it
To reach out even in the dullness of living
Make me feel appreciated
And I want his...
Man-parts to swell
Desire mounting an attack
Scrotum in full-metal mode
Thinking of me
I want a man who...
Cares about my pain
Who doesn't ignore me
When I'm in the room
Who looks at me
And away from ipad or tv
"are you ok" or "how are you sweetie"
Superficial in nature
Mean nothing to me
I want my man to...
Think about touching me
Get steely between his legs
Think I'm sexy no matter how I look
Find something beautiful about me
Let me know it
Make me feel appreciated
Published 27th Mar 2020
Author's Note
I grow impatient with the laziness in matters of admiration and sexual matters. I am somewhat crude and will after much ado and pain will leave your ass. Love or not. Love in my opinion cannot continue in a lackadaisical manner. It does not work. It is a poison to a love affair.
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"Love the design" of this submission Elsiesan. The way each verse reverses course. One speaks of a woman's wants & Expectations of unconditional Love from a woman's emotional prospective and her expectations. Then the latter is followed by a verse of the sexual connotation of the man's physical reaction to her and how she wants him to respond to her. Great Stuff!!
27th Mar 2020 7:16pm
27th Mar 2020 7:15pm
I love your responses to my poetry. They are raw, just as i think you are. I love naked, raw , it draws from that innate part of ourselves. Thank you for the comment and support of my work.
29th Mar 2020 8:42am
Yes, that would be nice wouldn't it? Seems, i am never fulfilled, most times kind of unhappy. I think it's in my dna. I am bound and determined though to get that man. There is one, but he is in another country, so here i am, in a virtual reality destined to never touch skin on skin. And i have one at home, who i adore(d), but he is so locked in himself and his path i fear, will never materialize.
Thank you for the compliment.
Thank you for the compliment.
30th Mar 2020 2:08am
