Falling Virtues

Fantastic

Thank you, sir, I am learning the practice of saying less words to impact the echo of the meaning, if that makes any sense to you at all

Yes it does. That is one reason I departed the other site.

Touché

Dear C,

I liked the irony of your piece. And its truth- for me, I don’t know that I see it as falling virtues. More like you’re just not that into him. It happens. No spark is no spark. Your piece however,  has lots of spark and says a lot in its brevity. Nicely done. H🌷

Thank you for your broaden self-interpretation it is very much appreciative🌷

Great poem.  Keep on writing.

With pleasure, sir and thanks

Your may find that I might be irritating you for saying this because some or many poets don't like doing it. I may be hypocritical for making the request or suggestion to you.

Please could you try to write something in the Notes so that readers like myself can be able to have an idea of your motivation or inspiration for writing the poem. I just find that informative to read and learn from you talented poets.  

As for the poem I found it to be brutally honest.

The best poems are the ones
Where the poets say what they feel
Without shame
Without embarrassment
Without fear

Sometimes sir the mind is varied in conceptual truth when it ponders, and then it acts upon the naked emotion of the words. I will give your advice consideration, and thank sir for the suggestion