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ARE THEY HUMAN BEINGS?
ARE THEY HUMAN BEINGS?
How can life beget some souls quite void
of emotions and give them man's form
to connect their flesh for sex then split
after getting their cheap needs like beasts?
Don't they feel when they relate two hearts,
nothing can sever what they have joined?
Sweetness rules their hearts and steals their love,
without which no joy of life survives.
How can one get joined with that sweat dear,
whose flesh can give them such lovely warmth
and go, leaving their hearts fully trapped
after spending minutes both adored?
BY JOSEPH ZENIEH
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
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How can life beget some souls quite void
of emotions and give them man's form
to connect their flesh for sex then split
after getting their cheap needs like beasts?
Don't they feel when they relate two hearts,
nothing can sever what they have joined?
Sweetness rules their hearts and steals their love,
without which no joy of life survives.
How can one get joined with that sweat dear,
whose flesh can give them such lovely warmth
and go, leaving their hearts fully trapped
after spending minutes both adored?
BY JOSEPH ZENIEH
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
____________________________________
Published 23rd Mar 2020
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24th Mar 2020 1:37am
Correct me if I’m wrong,
but abstract life has not the power
or capacity to beget like humans do,
not to mention birth immortal
disincarnate entities.
And am I wrong as well
to think that souls
possess psychologies
that are essentially the ones
displayed by sociopaths?
And why a screed that centers in
a moralistic preachy prudery
and sarcophobia?
What great theme is mooted here?
but abstract life has not the power
or capacity to beget like humans do,
not to mention birth immortal
disincarnate entities.
And am I wrong as well
to think that souls
possess psychologies
that are essentially the ones
displayed by sociopaths?
And why a screed that centers in
a moralistic preachy prudery
and sarcophobia?
What great theme is mooted here?
24th Mar 2020 1:47am
You ask:
How can life beget some souls quite void
of emotions and give them man's form
to connect their flesh for sex then split
after getting their cheap needs like beasts?
Are you going to answer your question? And are you saying that souls not only have flesh but split from their human forms after they've had sex? And is the expression "connect their flesh (to what?) **for** sex" good English?
What beautiful theme is this piece centered in?
How can life beget some souls quite void
of emotions and give them man's form
to connect their flesh for sex then split
after getting their cheap needs like beasts?
Are you going to answer your question? And are you saying that souls not only have flesh but split from their human forms after they've had sex? And is the expression "connect their flesh (to what?) **for** sex" good English?
What beautiful theme is this piece centered in?
Why do you love it? What's good about it? What makes it "great"? Please be specific.
And please answer the questions I pose to you in my subsequent message.
And please answer the questions I pose to you in my subsequent message.
