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Into The Wind
Pretty horses run wild
Into the caress of the wind love gallops
Taking the heart by storm
Only to realize minds never saddled
Into the caress of the wind love gallops
Taking the heart by storm
Only to realize minds never saddled
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Re. Into The Wind
23rd Mar 2020 6:44pm
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24th Mar 2020 00:00am
Thank you, LilDragonFly for reading, and the introduction to DUP, oh, and for the RL add
Re: Re. Into The Wind
24th Mar 2020 00:59am
It's quite humbling to have inspired a gifted poet's mind, thank you, sir
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24th Mar 2020 1:00am
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24th Mar 2020 8:30am
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Re. Into The Wind
8th Apr 2020 11:20am
This gives me a sense of freedom. I know that there was a time when some racial groups in our history were not allowed to own let alone ride horses because of those times of oppression. When seeing a black man or any woman on a horse was considered a taboo.
"Only to realize minds never saddled"
What did you mean when you wrote the last line. I would like to know what your thinking was there at the end.
"Only to realize minds never saddled"
What did you mean when you wrote the last line. I would like to know what your thinking was there at the end.
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8th Apr 2020 4:12pm
Thank you for reading, sir.
"Only to realize minds never saddled"
In the sole definition of truly loving someone, there are times in life when hearts are beautifully conjoined, and to give of one's mind to make it unconditionally, is just not... I've explained your question to the best of my ability.
"Only to realize minds never saddled"
In the sole definition of truly loving someone, there are times in life when hearts are beautifully conjoined, and to give of one's mind to make it unconditionally, is just not... I've explained your question to the best of my ability.
Re: Re. Into The Wind
8th Apr 2020 4:31pm
Thanks for the explanation. I would not have had that clarification without finding out the truth "from the horse's mouth" as they say.
I saw your restraint there as you said, "and to give of one's mind to make it unconditionally, is just not..."
I would have liked to know those thoughts but since you left the sentence unfinished I will never know.
I saw your restraint there as you said, "and to give of one's mind to make it unconditionally, is just not..."
I would have liked to know those thoughts but since you left the sentence unfinished I will never know.
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Re: Re. Into The Wind
8th Apr 2020 4:57pm
is just not..."
That is a singular statement within itself, as manifested, it just, ' was not present' sir
That is a singular statement within itself, as manifested, it just, ' was not present' sir