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SURRENDING OUR LOVE

As we enjoy this moment so filled with depth of our inner emotions as the raindrops fall down from the skies, mixing with the deepness of our true feelings that shines through our love in our heart and soul. Let us embrace each other, wrapping our arms around one another sealing our future with the deepest love, that two souls can entwine within the heart who can share silently within the raindrops. But yet as we take this moment to stop look and listen as the raindrops falls, and we become so mesmerize by this majesty moment for it is here we can stare into our eyes looking into the mere depth of our souls, as we go deeper than deep into our hearts causing our eyes to lock us into a hypnotize state of mind within the midnight waters that falls. For as we enjoy this moment together, just you and I standing within the rain and subconsciously connect with each other on a mental and emotional level, as our connectivity shows in how we feel in each others arms with love honor and respect looking into one anothers eyes. As it reflects that love that even shines even brighter, as we stand within the midnight raindrops that falls down upon us, from the heavenly skies falling upon one heart and one soul builded by love.
Written by Stoney223 (WOLF BAY33)
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Author's Note
WHEN YOU HAVE THAT CONNECTIVITY ON SO MANY LEVELS AS MAN AND WOMAN, LOVE CAN BE A VERY BEAUTIFUL AND UPLIFTING FEELING TO SHARE EVEN WITHIN THE MIDNIGHT RAIN...AMAS SHAMEL
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