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Trapped

She starts to shake. He's confessed to murdering her parents and he must feel he has nothing further to lose.

He flings open a bulky, rotting door, revealing a vast barren landscape made up of waterways and pylons and waste metal and industrial garbage. A blast of hot air surges into the building, along with a cloud of dust, hitting her in the face.

There's no sign of the police or Maxine. Instead, a giant incinerator spews out smoke in the distance, thick smoke, a foreboding shade of black, and the sun looks an unnatural shade of orange.


Written by Lozzamus
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Author's Note
Based on a previous novel attempt.
Genre: psychological thriller, crime
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