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Life Is Death
All this over hype kills
one by one
named then rearranged
taken down
cough, scratch, cough
how many times
sweating out through the night
I shake
I ache
take a number
it's in my mind
we're all just masked and blind
one by one
named then rearranged
taken down
cough, scratch, cough
how many times
sweating out through the night
I shake
I ache
take a number
it's in my mind
we're all just masked and blind
Published 22nd Mar 2020
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22nd Mar 2020 7:06pm
22nd Mar 2020 9:45pm
Being on self-quarantine shows responsibility and courage. Fine job on the poem. You may be ill but still write like a champ.
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2020 10:22pm
Take the very best care of yourself, Tim.
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2020 00:28am
Be safe and take care of yourself Tim - sending positive energy along with some fairy dust your way
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Xoxo Taryn
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Xoxo Taryn
24th Mar 2020 4:10pm
I’ve been in quarantine for the past 5 days after a dashing whirlwind relocation interstate for employment purposes, right before the interstate border closures.
Hopefully, you feel better soon... ❤️
Hopefully, you feel better soon... ❤️
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2020 12:39pm
This is so true. Beautifully written, really like it.
