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Senryu
True Submission
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True Submission
Gifted not taken
Cherished trust, respect and love
Only as she wills
Written by
Wh1skeySwagger
(Swagger)
Published
22nd Mar 2020
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Speakeasy
Erotica Done Right 18+!!!
Author's Note
Wish this could have two categories
Erotic and Love
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#BDSM
#haiku
#love
#respect
#senryu
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Re. True Submission
LilDragonFly
22nd Mar 2020 3:48pm
Oh ... this so gets it ... bravo ...
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Wh1skeySwagger
(Swagger)
22nd Mar 2020 4:39pm
Thank YOU !!!!!!!!!!
you are too kind :)
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Re. True Submission
Stoney223
(WOLF BAY33)
23rd Mar 2020 11:13am
yes this right here is truth at it finest sensual with seduction of a true submission only as she wills..respect brother
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Wh1skeySwagger
(Swagger)
23rd Mar 2020 1:05pm
Thank you Stoney
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Stoney223
(WOLF BAY33)
23rd Mar 2020 1:15pm
respect brother
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Countygal
(Wh1skeysTeacup)
25th Mar 2020 3:07am
Beautifully said Swagger
One world ...Two souls...Bound together
❤❤
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Wh1skeySwagger
(Swagger)
25th Mar 2020 3:29am
As it should be my tea cup
In a long slow beautiful dance
Thank you for stopping in and commenting :)
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Re. True Submission
AspergerPoet56
24th Jul 2020 11:10pm
This is grest short piece
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Re. True Submission
Wh1skeySwagger
(Swagger)
24th Jul 2020 11:27pm
Thank you AP
I have always been a fan of haiku and senryu. Sometimes more can be said with less :)
Thanks for stopping in and for your support brother poet
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