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In Her Rightful Place
A rare gem
Birthed..
Broken..
Shattered...
To just an unrecognizable figure
Now
Specially placed in her rightful place
Craved
Shaved
Molded
She came out of the darkest pit
exquisitely designed
Beautifully divined
.... Fragile ...
Shining brightly
A souvenir of achievement
She finally made it
Finally ....
Flutters of joy lay
In what use to be such a cold place
A quiet sea
Sand at her feet
A beautiful sight to see
Internal ecstacy
Birthed..
Broken..
Shattered...
To just an unrecognizable figure
Now
Specially placed in her rightful place
Craved
Shaved
Molded
She came out of the darkest pit
exquisitely designed
Beautifully divined
.... Fragile ...
Shining brightly
A souvenir of achievement
She finally made it
Finally ....
Flutters of joy lay
In what use to be such a cold place
A quiet sea
Sand at her feet
A beautiful sight to see
Internal ecstacy
Published 19th Mar 2020
Author's Note
A feeling that no one can take away from me
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19th Mar 2020 10:34am
I really like the layout, especially the single word lines, giving those words their own space signifying their importance!
20th Mar 2020 3:29am
19th Mar 2020 8:04pm
Really nice piece!! Beautifully penned 🙌👏 the ending is so spectacular
"Finally ....
Flutters of joy lay
In what use to be such a cold place
A quiet sea
Sand at her feet
A beautiful sight to see
Internal ecstacy"
Just lovely 👏🙌🙌
"Finally ....
Flutters of joy lay
In what use to be such a cold place
A quiet sea
Sand at her feet
A beautiful sight to see
Internal ecstacy"
Just lovely 👏🙌🙌
20th Mar 2020 3:30am
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